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You are lonely.
I lay in my box, lifeless
   collecting dust.

What is air
          when I breathe uselessness
What is sentience
          when I am naïve
                    you cradle me close
                    a heartbeat encompasses my hollowness
                             I am alive again.

You sigh into my unobstructed ear
        she loves me not right now
               and my jaw slackens in silent exclamation
               as your hands, warm and sensual
               stroke my back
                   until I am made wet from the sweat upon your palms
                   until I cry out what your passions require
                            with your sultry tone echoing in the darkness
        the show has reached its end.
              
I fall limp in your hands
                 my eyes roll into the back of my head.

You wash off the guilt, up to your elbows
        and place me in my box
               I become comatose
               telling secrets to its desolate corners
        like how you need me not
               when she loves you again
                if only for a little while.

But again, oh
       you are lonely.
I turn to ashes.

          You choke on the cinders.
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Author's Comments

Of course.
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This poem is the first part in the second section of my collection of poems for this cycle.

Part One: Reinvention
July 29th - January 4th

Part Two: A More Perfect Design
January 5th - ?

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wow. i love the way you have it set. the way it falls on the page says just as much as the poem does

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I really like this one for some reason... I just cant exactly pinpoint why ^^;

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I love how you gave the puppet emotions ^^
And if though it sounds depressing, it's passionate >.> not sure how to describe it lol
Any particular reason "right now" is bold?

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"What's done is done! Learn from your mistakes and live for tomorrow..."

"Just because you can do something, doesn't mean you should."
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:)
Thank you very much.

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Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
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As long as you like it, that's quite alright. :)

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Join! ~deutsch

Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
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Ah, I see you have an observant eye. :)

But if I were to tell you, it would defeat the purpose of my poetry.
The question you have to ask yourself is this: can you look past the obvious and see the message beneath?

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Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
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zomg my head lol

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"What's done is done! Learn from your mistakes and live for tomorrow..."

"Just because you can do something, doesn't mean you should."
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zomg my head lol

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"What's done is done! Learn from your mistakes and live for tomorrow..."

"Just because you can do something, doesn't mean you should."
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One day, Ashley, you'll understand.

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Join! ~deutsch

Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.

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