Thump- thump.
Thump-thump.
There are raging bodies everywhere.
Slick.
Squirming.
Half-naked.
Screaming
wailing
shrieking
as the delicate veils rise
and all is revealed
with a sheer beast, a titan, roaring into the spaces that keep all of us bitter-sweetly together
making all seem perfect
while stealing our sanity
but we all know that it’s taken for granted, anyways.
And we love it.
I stand
gasping for just the smallest amount of breath
as the waves of beautifully
heavy
dark
and
evil music
wash crushingly over me
making every inch of skin
that is bare or covered
quake violently
liquefying my soft insides.
I feel as if I have been bitten by a seductive spider
preparing my soul
to be stolen from me.
There are aching bodies everywhere.
Sweating profusely
their breaths vibrating in my chest
rubbing against me
the heat from their friction is suffocating
and making my uneasy head swim
Saliva
sweat
urine
sex
fill the stale air
casting shadows
on the legion of thirsty
and unfortunately frustrated
just enough to tease them
and cause their quick tongues to twitch behind their chapped lips
But there is something else
lurking, lurking
watching me silently
a predator
yet I cannot see it
But I can’t move.
The bodies against me
exert so much force
and pressure
I am helpless
and left obviously vulnerable
to be digested
and die at the hands of something
more powerful than me
There are dirty bodies everywhere.
Screaming
wailing
shrieking
completely unaware
that it is come for
coming for my terror
my frenzy
my flesh
and I can’t escape the fate it holds for me
The devilish melodies swallow
the rambunctious bodies
they’re everywhere
stretching for as far as the unobstructed eye can see
and I can feel the presence of the executioner creeping
closer, closer
and I realize that I cannot escape
despite my struggles to be free
the more I lash out
fight
and
squirm against the antagonized bodies
the more they grind ferociously against my skin
their heat stealing all of the water from my pores
insanely beating
beating
all that I am
they have no mercy for this small one
who’s nemesis is creeping, creeping
like an insect
forever close and uncomfortable
Thump-thump
Thump-thump
The music is wasting away from my ears
and time is slowing down
the lights licking the raving bodies
in shades of blue
green
purple
and
red
are becoming more and more incandescent
to my sensitive pupils
that dilated from the shock of knowing
that eradication is upon me
the executioner is here
he slithered through the spaces between the wired bodies (they’re everywhere)
that the titan’s roar could not fill
and
Thump.
Thump.
something important is fleeing from me
taking the most crucial pieces
fading, fading
and I can’t concentrate on anything
except the hungry bodies
swirling around me
like a cyclone
and I realize I am terribly sick
swirling, swirling
Everything’s withering away from my conscience
verging with the lights
And
Thump.
my eyes roll loosely into the back of my weary head
as my executioner wraps its deadly fingers around my tender neck
and I fall, limply, into the sea of the hungry bodies (Oh God they’re everywhere)
thump.
lost to the feeling
of never living again.
















Comments
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Help the dragons hatch!! Click view on each one to help them grow!!
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I eat babies.
I use the word everywhere because in the poem, that's the only word that has the "oompf" to describe the person's situation. There literally bodies everywhere "as far as the unobstructed eye can see."
Everywhere as in, I can't escape them.
Haha, yeah, there we go.
I'm glad you like it, though. ^^
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"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."
[JDM] [JA]
It depends on the message you are trying to get across.
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Dessert...
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My novel - ch 1 [link]
"But why is the rum gone? If this was a dream there would be rum"
However, regardless of content, random enjambment adds absolutely nothing. Were you trying to echo an oscillating/frenzied crowd? That's the only 'logical' explanation I can think of, but it didn't work.
If you can show me concrete depth, I'll give my respects.
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"I love when you make the dictionary your bitch."
"You seduce the English language and use it for your own sordid ends."
[JDM] [JA]
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Help the dragons hatch!! Click view on each one to help them grow!!
[link]
I eat babies.
I'm not going to try and convince you to like this piece or my work; if you don't like it, then you don't like it. That's your choice and your opinion and even if I don't like it, I will respect it.
I obviously fucked up on this one, though.
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