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If forwards isn’t working
    read me backwards
             replace my adjectives with your intent
   the plot is weak
         and my character is waning

Indent my eyes
             rewrite the marrow in my bones
            edit the blood beneath my skin
                    because it doesn’t flow quite right
           the pauses in my breath are too short
          the punctuation is lacking
                yet still I am the last word missing from
                      your story.



Come find me.
Come find me.
Come find me.



                                                            You were meant to.
:iconemotionally-executed:

Author's Comments

I know we don't know each other, but everyday I wonder, while busy writing, or reading, or whatever, what you are doing.



And then I sigh softly, wondering if you are happy.

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:iconthetaoofchaos:
you really allowed the flow of your incredibly powerful feelings out in a steady verse, without muting the passion that's all too apparent.

a poem to fall for.

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconmarvintheparanoid:
Oh, the last bits of this really take it to a new level - you set it up, writing, writing, writing, and pow! there's destiny too!

--
“The darkness is gathered ‘round this night.
And the stars are dim in the city.”

=PoetryPlease ~PoeticPath
:iconsuperkleric:
Love this. The repetition at the end creates a haunting effect.
:iconihaveastory:
I really enjoy this poem, I'd be interested to know your thoughts behind it, if you feel like sharing. :)

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"the body is the vehicle, bound by time.
the mind is the mechanics, bound by logic.
the soul is the part from the whole attempting to be an individual.
and the spirit is what remains of the bond shared before there was time."

I Have a Story
:iconemotionally-executed:
It's to my future spouse. Haha.

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Join! ~deutsch

Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
:iconihaveastory:
lol

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"the body is the vehicle, bound by time.
the mind is the mechanics, bound by logic.
the soul is the part from the whole attempting to be an individual.
and the spirit is what remains of the bond shared before there was time."

I Have a Story
:iconemotionally-executed:
I'm a goober, I know. xD

--
Join! ~deutsch

Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
:iconihaveastory:
Goober. I love that word. hehe.

--
"the body is the vehicle, bound by time.
the mind is the mechanics, bound by logic.
the soul is the part from the whole attempting to be an individual.
and the spirit is what remains of the bond shared before there was time."

I Have a Story
:iconwithered-frozen-lips:
I really love this poem. You have an amazing way with words. :3

--
While some people make love,
others expect rain.

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