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You catch tears with your teeth
        so you can tie knots and pretty bows
             around your neck
        because sometimes you feel a little insecure
                                                      a little lost
                                                      a little ugly
                     and everything’s better when you’re a sight for sore eyes
                     instead of a malicious sore on an eye
                                 whose pus refuses to let it see.

I paint cloudless days with murmurs of a life a little inspirational
                                                                        a little lovely
                                                                        a little unconventional
   baby blue eyes upon the trees
           soft caresses
   
So you cut off my face
          and slip it over yours
          praying that one day the sun will rise
                       and you will wake
                       with my taste on your lips
                               my breath in your lungs
          a lingering morning
              in which dew dissolves the observations
                  of a lonely fool.
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A little beside yourself.

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i love these lines:
So you cut off my face
and slip it over yours

haha i had to pick the most macabre lines from it.

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Haha, I like them too.
Actually, those were the first lines I wrote in this piece.
I wrote around those lines.

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Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
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kickin ass and not looking back Nicely done

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:)
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Hey, are we going to the movies tomorrow?

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Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
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dont know
i dont care

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Zelda: Welcome to my plaground. The entry fee is one heart.

Link: Damn it I just got this damn thing
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Well, you're pretty lame.

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Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
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i try

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Zelda: Welcome to my plaground. The entry fee is one heart.

Link: Damn it I just got this damn thing
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ooo I finally get to read one of your poems ^^ very nice

Hey, would you mind if I drew a picture for one of your poems? I'm not sure which yet, I'll have to look through your gallery

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"What's done is done! Learn from your mistakes and live for tomorrow..."

"Just because you can do something, doesn't mean you should."
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No, that would be great! :)
I'd feel purdy schweet. ;)

IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN.

>.>

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Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.

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